The interlopers

Today we read the interlopers, by Saki. My partner, Julia Allen, and I were not satisfied with the ending of the story. We rearrange the story line. We cut up the story and placed the different parts in a random order, trying multiple different orders, until we found one that suited us. The order we finally chose was 2,3,7,6,4,5,1. We imagined Ulrich Von gradwitz dreaming if what might happen if the two men actually met in the woods. We found this a better ending for the story, even if in the end they are still not friends. We added different sentences that made a clearer transition into the story. In the end we were satisfied with the story line we created.